Hi Reed I really like your pictures! I think the go cart approach is unique and different then some of the other sequence pictures I've seen. I like how not only are we able to see the go cart in action but also able to see the process of making the go cart as well. For your 8th and 9th picture I like how the background is all blurry and it focuses on the driver and the go cart perfectly. Also for your 11th picture the POV which you shot at is really nice and I think you could try to do more of those for future pictures. For that same photo I'm not sure if you could change your F-stop so that were also able to see the decals on the front. The only thing I'd suggest would to maybe reorder some of your pictures to have the sequence flow better. Ex. move your first picture below your 4th one so we could see it all come together and maybe ordering your pictures by the production of making the go cart, pictures of the go cart, the dirver, then the go cart in action. Overall good job!
Hi Reed I really like your pictures! I think the go cart approach is unique and different then some of the other sequence pictures I've seen. I like how not only are we able to see the go cart in action but also able to see the process of making the go cart as well. For your 8th and 9th picture I like how the background is all blurry and it focuses on the driver and the go cart perfectly. Also for your 11th picture the POV which you shot at is really nice and I think you could try to do more of those for future pictures. For that same photo I'm not sure if you could change your F-stop so that were also able to see the decals on the front. The only thing I'd suggest would to maybe reorder some of your pictures to have the sequence flow better. Ex. move your first picture below your 4th one so we could see it all come together and maybe ordering your pictures by the production of making the go cart, pictures of the go cart, the dirver, then the go cart in action. Overall good job!
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